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Mine: Justice dwells in the wilderness. Justice dwells in the wild. Justice dwells in wilderness. Justice sits outside, waiting.

Justice waits in the wild.

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I love the alliteration of the last one!

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Yes, the last one became my favorite too! Going into the novel!

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I really love how you described the wild in the fourth sentence!

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The work is all that remains

The only thing left to do is the work

It’s all done now but the work

Only thing left now is the work

All that’s left now is the work

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I love this, Walter!

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This is really cool. The similar lengths in the sentences make this so poetic.

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